D. F. Krieger

Sunday, March 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Warning: Before you read any further, I must warn you the below snippet is X-rated. So don't act like you're surprised when you realize it's about sex. If you are okay with this, you may continue. As always, I thank you in advance for your comments and wish you all the best of weekends!


The dark haired man, whose name she had yet to learn, was far more brooding and silent. His chocolate eyes stared at her with a defiance that had her growing wet as she imagined forcing him to bend to her will. He was taller, his shoulders broad, and his muscles clearly defined. He worked out, and often. She imagined his body stretched out on her bed as she rode that stoic stare right off his face.

Sail My Oceans ~ D. F. Krieger

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15 comments:

Dawne Prochilo said...

All I can say is...ride him hard

Sandra Sookoo said...

Nice!

graylinfox said...

"as she rode that stoic stare right off his face."

Giddy up!

Sarah Grimm said...

"as she rode that stoic stare right off his face." What a fabulous image this provokes!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Hehe, I love that ending - it's fabulous! :)

Roseanne Dowell said...

definitely HOT

Fallon said...

...imagined forcing him to her will.

Definitely hot!

Jay Di Meo said...

Hot snippet! Great six!

Arlene said...

love the pace as the guy's shown, the crackle building at her attraction, and the sizzling end line.

Lisa Fox said...

That sounds like that would be an excellent ride!

heatherthurmeier said...

Sounds like a wild ride!

J.Rose Allister said...

Oh yeah, I'm imagining it right along with her!

Christine London said...

Nice turn of phrase..riding the stoic stare. Well done. Thanks for sharing.
Regards,
Christine London
www.christinelondon.com

Eleri Stone said...

I like the voice. Like the way she thinks.

Jayel Kaye said...

yipee, kia, yia ya